…the descriptions, movements, and dialogue flowed & read effortlessly. I was ready to read hours upon hours of it. That’s all! You’re a very skilled writer (even without minding how much I’m the kind of person the subject matter & tone cater to) Hope you’re doing well and enjoying your day! ~ CD
I write to make incomprehensible girls feel understood. And if you ask me, they should be grateful for the understanding.
So praise —heartfelt and voluminous— isn’t simply appreciated… it’s something of a baseline expectation.
For what it’s worth, you’ve made an excellent start.